Hey guys i'm new here but me and my friend are working on a series of manga titled "Tickled Black..." My english teacher said I was a good writer and my friend illistrates(SP?) real good so it should be good

Here's the first line..,
"And then I was falling...... falling off that cliff that was on that dark ocean's edge.... Ha! it's funny, really everyone has been warned about it... so many times.., and I fell... and as I hit the giant rocks... I woke up..." I hoped you liked that preview. (it will make more sense when you read more) Well I'm typing this on my wii and it`s a pain in the butt >< so baiiiii!!!